[Week 4]

When I evaluate my own work, I often judge my work too badly or too leniently. I think it's because the impression that my work gives to myself is different from what others have because only I know what process I went through. On the other hand, others' reaction to my work is more objective and focused on the work itself than on my own assessment. So it is very helpful to think about how to develop and modify works in the future.

About last week's draft.The feedback was mainly about what needs to be fixed. I accepted this feedback and decided to develop the work in a different way from the draft, and paid more attention to the sounds and images that would go into the work. And this week, feedback on the work was somewhat different from that on the draft. Although the draft did not arouse sympathy, there were classmates who sympathized with the work, and they praised the revision. In addition, there was a student who gave advice on the direction of the work. Previously, my work seemed to be just tacky, but after hearing the opinions of my classmates, I felt like I could look at it with a more objective perspective.

It took me a long time to understand because I am not good at English. But because it was hard to understand, I could concentrate more on the sound and listen to the work. Through Kim Young-eun's works, I came to think about how a work composed solely of text and sound, rather than a flamboyant visual element, can deliver messages efficiently. Just as the visual elements are cut and pasted to adjust in visual art works, sound also needs to be paid attention to the delivery of messages and adjusted to their intentions.